如何寫中考英語作文(附點評)
    命題作文即給出一個統(tǒng)一的題目，限定考生寫作的具體范圍，要求考生就同一主題展開敘述或評論。寫好命題作文的關(guān)鍵是緊扣主題、立意明確、觀點清晰。
    命題作文
    [例1]To be a lovely Shanghainese(2003年上海市英語中考題)
    審題：該題的重點在于闡述作為一個可愛的上海人，我們關(guān)鍵應(yīng)怎樣做?在2003年的考生作文中，有一部分同學(xué)發(fā)生了嚴重的偏題，把描述重點放在形容上海是怎樣的一個大都市，因此失分很多。由此看來，審題的準確是非常重要的。
    學(xué)生作文：Shanghai is developing quickly everyday. Quite a few foreigners come to visit Shanghai. As the hosts of Shanghai, we must be lovely Shanghaineses to tell the visitors that Shanghai is an international city. To be a lovely Shanghainese, first, we should do our best to make the city more beautiful to show our enthusiasm. Next, we should be kind and friendly to everyone. We must do so to make our guests fell our zeal. Finally, we should study and work hard to rise our ability. Shanghai is developing and we should make progress to follow the epoch.
    教師評析：該篇作文行文流暢，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，以"first，Next，F(xiàn)inally"的結(jié)構(gòu)描述，層次感很強。不定式的恰當運用體現(xiàn)了考生較好的語法功底。
    教師擬評分：9分
    [例2]Four years' school life
    審題：該題要求考生對四年的初中生活進行回顧和總結(jié)，適合以夾敘夾議的方式來寫作。(此外，從情感教育的角度來看，閱卷老師總希望讀到考生回憶自己美好、快樂的初中生活，而不是討厭自己的母校、老師、同學(xué)等消極情緒的體現(xiàn)。)
    學(xué)生作文：I've been in my middle school for four years. Four years' school life plays an important role in my life. I enjoy making friends, getting knowledge and having interesting time in my school. I have also made friendship with lots of classmates, and I have also been taught different lessons by lots of different patient teachers. I have grown up a lot in the past four years. I will never forget my four years' school life.
    教師評析：整篇作文非常明快、流暢，體現(xiàn)了考生對母校依依不舍的情懷。由于是對初中生活的回顧和總結(jié)，考生恰當?shù)剡x擇以現(xiàn)在完成時作為主要的時態(tài)來強調(diào)影響和結(jié)果,文中'plays an important role'這一詞組和被動語態(tài)的正確運用也體現(xiàn)了考生良好的詞匯和語法功底。
    教師擬評分：10分
    中考英語作文題型分析與例文評析：應(yīng)用文
    應(yīng)用文寫作
    應(yīng)用文主要包括信函、電郵、日記、通知、廣告、電話等形式，它要求考生不僅能表達題中的主要內(nèi)容，還能夠正確地運用各種文本格式進行規(guī)范的書寫，這也是 考生對于英語傳統(tǒng)文化了解多少的反映。因此，考生應(yīng)在臨考前系統(tǒng)地復(fù)習(xí)各種文本格式以及打電話的規(guī)范用語，以做到處變不驚、百戰(zhàn)百勝。
    [例3]寫一封信給你在云南省西雙版納市的筆友李帆，告訴他你很愿意與他交朋友，并邀請他到上海來旅行。
    審題：該題要求考生以規(guī)范的信件格式來書寫，并把題中所出現(xiàn)的信息點都涵概在內(nèi)。建議考生可把題目中的信息點都一一劃出，以免發(fā)生遺漏。
    學(xué)生作文：
    Lifan
    Xishuangbanna Yunnan Province China May 25th, 2004
    Dear Lifan,
    Thank you for your letter. I'm glad to be your pen-friend. We are the same years old, but we were born in different places. In my imagination, Xishuangbanna is a very beautiful place. There are a lot of plants and animals. You know I look forward to visiting Xishuangbanna. Would you like to come to Shanghai? I'd like to invite you to Shanghai in summer holiday. Shanghai is also a beautiful place. It is a modern city. There are a lot of interesting places such as the Oriental Pearl TV Tower, the Bund, and Nanjing Road Walkway.
    If you come here, I will show you around Shanghai. You can live at my home and my mother will cook you much delicious food. Let's be best friends!
    Yours sincerely,
    Xiaomin
    教師擬評分：9分
    [例4]寫一篇題為"A Visit To_____"的日記。
    審題：該題為半命題式作文?？忌艘⒁膺\用正確的日記格式，還可根據(jù)自己的經(jīng)驗和熟悉程度來選擇、確定文章的主題.
    學(xué)生作文：
    May 25th, 2004 　　 sunny
    A Visit To Jinmao Building
    Jinmao Building has Chinese traditional styles and it is also modern. It is the signal construction of Shanghai. It is located in the center of Lujiazui Financial Area. Our family visited Jinmao Building today.
    The traffic there is very convenient. You can got here by tunnel and No.2 subway. And if you live near it, you can walk there just like our family. We went to the eighty-eighth floor of Jinmao Building. We saw the whole view of Shanghai there. Please come to Jinmao Building, and you will get some unexpected gains there.
    教師評析：整篇作文主題明確，對于金茂大廈的描述也較具體，文中"the signal construction"一詞是全文的亮點。但整篇文章的層次不夠清晰，句子也以簡單句為主，對于參觀這一動詞的闡述還不夠充分。
    教師擬評分：8分
    

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