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    As is indicated in the cartoon above,a big crowded of drivers stay in cars on the road,waiting for their turn to go,with patience almost running up(表達不準(zhǔn)確且句子缺成分，根據(jù)圖片可改為and even some people want to hold the car to go out of the long queue).In fact ,nowadays,this phenomenon reflected by the picture is so widespread,especially in super(super改為big，super表示“超級”，用在此處不合適)cities.Thanks to the fast development of economy,we have a chance to experience the more(去掉the more，rich為單音節(jié)形容詞，其比較級直接在后面加-er即可) richer life.As a result of that,(第一句用thanks to表示原因，第二句用as a result of that也表示原因，這樣有點繁瑣，建議將兩句話合為一句話，可改為and)the number of people who own cars is larger and larger.The once wide roads become narrow (漢語式英語，可改為The wide roads before become narrow now).In order to get to destination(改為destinations，每個人的目的地不一樣，應(yīng)用復(fù)數(shù)形式)on time,people have to set up (改為set out，set up意為“建立，創(chuàng)立”;set out為“出發(fā)”，注意短語的正確選擇) earlier in case of being blocked.By the way ,discharging too much carbon-dioxide to the air would(改為will) destroy the environment.Therefore,it is imperative for us to take measures to change the fact.The simplest method is to diminish the times(改為time，time在表示“時間”時，為不可數(shù)名詞，當(dāng)“次數(shù)”講時為可數(shù)名詞) of using private transportations.There is no doubt the world would change into a better place for us to live benefited from all the efforts we devote.(漢語式英語，可改為There is no doubt that the world will be better for us to live in as long as all of us devote our efforts.)
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