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    As is shown in the picture the humans (加who are)divided alone keep contact with each other by internet. Every one owns a computer ,which is their mainly(mainly為副詞，用來修飾動詞;mean為名詞，需要用形容詞來修飾，可改為main) mean(改為way或means，mean為“平均值，意思”;而means為“手段，方法”) to contact out(改為with the outside world).In addition,there are spider net between everyone(改為it just like a spider net),which lead the people alone.The picture revealed(時態(tài)保持一致，改為reveals) a current social phenomenon that people dependent(改為depend，從句謂語部分應用動詞) extravagantly on the internet rather than the normal conversation. The spider net is a great metaphor of the soul-wall(改為the gap between two hearts),which alienate(改為alienates，保持主謂一致)us,meanwhile,it is a net relate(改為relate to) us. What’s more(加逗號) worrisome(改為the worrisome thing;worrisome為形容詞，不能做主語) is that they not only contact with strangers with(改為by，by表示“通過某種方式”) the net,but also families. It is a dangerous game! Maybe,it would make the families destruction(改為destructive,注意make sb./sth. + adj.的正確使用).In my opinion,though the association in internet itself gives little cause for criticism(句子表意不清，建議改為the internet itself should not give much criticism),people should use it in a proper way. Chatting with strangers or distant fellows by computer is OK,but it is indispensable for us to use it in(改為with) close friends. To have a good result,the society should encourage the people to focus more on the real world and the people themselves should enrich their lives and thoughts.
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