英國(guó)的教育水平高，一流院校眾多，每年申請(qǐng)留學(xué)英國(guó)的競(jìng)爭(zhēng)異常激烈。那么英國(guó)的申請(qǐng)文書(shū)是很重要的，接下來(lái)出國(guó)留學(xué)網(wǎng)小編將為大家介紹英國(guó)圣安德魯斯大學(xué)留學(xué)essay怎么寫(xiě)？
    首先來(lái)看看書(shū)寫(xiě)須知。
    最好的申請(qǐng)essay是全面展現(xiàn)你這個(gè)人，例如你曾受到過(guò)他人什么影響或者你曾如何影響過(guò)他人，所以你的essay主題不能讓招生官在閱讀的過(guò)程中猜測(cè)你是否不愛(ài)社交，自戀或者精神上有異常。
    避免有爭(zhēng)議的和極端的主題。即使你在寫(xiě)essay時(shí)注意平衡你的觀點(diǎn)，但是essay里面也會(huì)包括部分招生官反對(duì)的觀點(diǎn)。招生官非?？粗啬闼鶎?xiě)的essay內(nèi)容。
    避免措辭詼諧和寫(xiě)詩(shī)，因?yàn)楹茈y起作用。藝術(shù)存在于旁觀者的眼中，所以你認(rèn)為寫(xiě)的有趣的東西可能不會(huì)起到效果。
    避免創(chuàng)造拼寫(xiě)，噱頭和其他一切非傳統(tǒng)形式的essay寫(xiě)作。這只會(huì)給招生官留下一個(gè)不好的印象。不要為了追求與眾不同而表現(xiàn)的不同。
    不要把essay寫(xiě)得很枯燥。如果你的essay無(wú)法給招生官留下積極向上的好印象，那將淹沒(méi)在一堆申請(qǐng)文書(shū)當(dāng)中。不要寫(xiě)你的人生哲學(xué)，因此大部分17歲左右的少年并沒(méi)有太多經(jīng)歷足夠可以談人生哲學(xué)。
    不要在你的essay中重申你在其他申請(qǐng)材料里面表述過(guò)的信息。你最好也不要在essay中提及你的運(yùn)動(dòng)經(jīng)歷，不管你是否在一場(chǎng)比賽中取得了成功還是失敗。
    公益旅行也不要出現(xiàn)在你的essay當(dāng)中，例如在其他地區(qū)或國(guó)家?guī)椭恍埣踩说穆眯小４蟛糠诌@樣的經(jīng)歷寫(xiě)在essay中會(huì)顯得很膚淺，這種經(jīng)歷缺乏深度，只會(huì)在某種程度上反映你的特權(quán)存在。
    不要寫(xiě)任何反映你缺乏判斷，不成熟，以自我為中心或缺乏同情心的內(nèi)容，即使你想討論你的成長(zhǎng)過(guò)程。一旦你突出了你不好的一面，你很難扭轉(zhuǎn)招生官的印象，千萬(wàn)不要表現(xiàn)得自己優(yōu)越感很強(qiáng)。
    不要在essay中批評(píng)你所申請(qǐng)的大學(xué)，即使你提的是建設(shè)性意見(jiàn)。
    陳詞濫調(diào)盡量減少，招生官希望能看到獨(dú)一無(wú)二的essay。引用的話也要少寫(xiě)，招生官更在意你個(gè)人的觀點(diǎn)。
    在寫(xiě)essay的時(shí)候不要使用辭典，也不要讓你的父母幫助你寫(xiě)essay。一定要在essay完成之后校對(duì)語(yǔ)法和拼寫(xiě)，因?yàn)闆](méi)有什么能比拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤和語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤給人留下更糟糕的印象。
    接著來(lái)看看書(shū)寫(xiě)常見(jiàn)錯(cuò)誤。
    1、對(duì)申請(qǐng)學(xué)校認(rèn)知不多。
    有的學(xué)生在選擇學(xué)校和專業(yè)的時(shí)候沒(méi)有仔細(xì)考慮自身的情況，甚至有的抱著非名校不讀的想法，但是也沒(méi)有仔細(xì)去咨詢了解對(duì)方學(xué)校的情況。因此對(duì)于大多學(xué)校都會(huì)提出的問(wèn)題——why choose this school，學(xué)生不能說(shuō)出學(xué)校的大致情況、特點(diǎn)和優(yōu)勢(shì)，回答時(shí)敷衍了事，只說(shuō)出最表層的一些東西。回答不到位就暴露出自己的態(tài)度，很難看出申請(qǐng)人對(duì)學(xué)校的興趣和向往程度。
    2、回答問(wèn)題時(shí)沒(méi)有正確審題。
    一些在思想上很懶惰的學(xué)生總以為各個(gè)學(xué)校問(wèn)的題目差不多就可以互相借用，沒(méi)有認(rèn)真審題就把申請(qǐng)學(xué)校A的套用在學(xué)校B上；還有的學(xué)生審題不到位，在內(nèi)容上出現(xiàn)了很多與主題或者申請(qǐng)不相干的部分。
    3、找不到思路，不會(huì)轉(zhuǎn)換。
    有的學(xué)生想考察學(xué)生的思維靈活度，想知道學(xué)生的專業(yè)水平或是人際交往的態(tài)度等，提出的問(wèn)題都是很簡(jiǎn)單的。例如芝加哥大學(xué)：請(qǐng)比較蘋(píng)果和橘子，這個(gè)題目就不應(yīng)該只寫(xiě)兩種水果的區(qū)別什么的，可以將兩種水果擬人化，各種水果代表哪兩種人等等?？傊?，思維不要太死板，學(xué)會(huì)轉(zhuǎn)換。
    4、詞句使用不恰當(dāng)。
    大多英語(yǔ)水平有待提高的學(xué)生要么用詞太過(guò)簡(jiǎn)單，要么總是喜歡用晦澀、深?yuàn)W的來(lái)讓錄取官認(rèn)為自己的具有多大的詞匯量。前者會(huì)使文章顯得沒(méi)有一點(diǎn)深度，后者容易使文章看著不順暢，讀著拗口。所以，在寫(xiě)作時(shí)首先要有條理表明自己的看法，其次使文章讀起來(lái)語(yǔ)句通順，再使用一些有真正意義和內(nèi)涵的語(yǔ)句。
    5、文章呈現(xiàn)的語(yǔ)氣讓人難以接受。
    有的文章語(yǔ)氣平平毫無(wú)生氣；有的過(guò)于激烈，為了顯示自己是對(duì)的，極力鼓吹自己的看法或價(jià)值觀；有的一味夸對(duì)方學(xué)校是多么地有名氣，甚至用哀憐的語(yǔ)氣博得錄取官的同情。這都是不可取的，適當(dāng)?shù)刭潛P(yáng)即可，盡量使文章讀起來(lái)有生機(jī)活力，做到態(tài)度理性冷靜客觀。
    6、語(yǔ)法拼寫(xiě)等小錯(cuò)誤。
    有的學(xué)生單詞拼錯(cuò)，語(yǔ)法用錯(cuò)，用翻譯機(jī)器硬生生地翻譯，出現(xiàn)頻率過(guò)高。學(xué)生不僅需要提高英文水平，最好是學(xué)會(huì)英語(yǔ)思維。
    　　最后來(lái)看看一篇范文。
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