2012年6月16日雅思考試回憶(網(wǎng)友分享版)
許飛:6月14日雅思寫作解析
Writing Task One
【考察題目】【2012年6月16日】
表格題(table)
據(jù)考生回憶,此次考察的題目是五個(gè)國家在2006年二氧化碳(carbon dioxide)的排放量(emission)情況說明。
【寫作小貼士】
表格題(Table)曾經(jīng)出現(xiàn)在劍橋系列叢書B5P98“Underground Railway Systems”---單表格、B6P30“Global water use by sector”+“Water consumption in Brazil and Congo in 2000”---線圖+表格、B7P30“Percentage of national consumer expenditure by category---2002”以及B8P30“Causes of worldwide land degradation”+“Causes of land degradation by region”---餅圖+表格,針對(duì)此類題目,需提醒大家注意的是:仔細(xì)觀察表格橫行和縱列各自代表的意義,另外在body paragraph(s)寫作的過程中,第一縱列內(nèi)所列內(nèi)容一個(gè)不能缺,具體如下:第一、開頭introduction釋義題目,變換題目words, phrases and sentence structure;第二、在寫作body paragraph(s)時(shí),注意“相似數(shù)據(jù)”描述以及“大小數(shù)據(jù)”比較論述;第三、conclusion段寫作時(shí),注意對(duì)body paragraph(s)數(shù)據(jù)客觀解析部分進(jìn)行總體趨勢概述。
【寫作語匯推薦】
1-figure/data/statistics
2-represent
3-with the exception of
4-show/reveal
5-general increase/decrease
6-comparatively
7-out of the total number of
8-in the percentage of
9-far more significant
10-in the same period
11-compared to
12-fairly stable
13-in comparison to
14-on the other hand
15-be scheduled to
【寫作句型推薦】
1-The table shows that….
2-The opposite appeared to be the case.
3-The figures for both A and B were comparatively low.
4-Out of the total number of those aged over 65 and older, A saw a general increase.
5-C followed this trend.
6-This represented an increase of more than 10 per cent compared to A’s 5 percent and B’s 3 per cent.
7-A figure doubled in comparison to the percentage of….
8-C, on the other hand, remained constant with….
9-C had a lower proportion of….
10-Overall, it is clear that….
So far,Writing Task One無論是Bar Chart,Line Graph,Table,還是Pie Chart,拼圖亦或是Map都有考察,F(xiàn)low Chart/Diagram依舊未曾露面!常言道:More haste, less speed!還得繼續(xù)make some cliché remark:革命尚未成功,同志仍需努力!只要“敵軍”尚未露面,我們就不可放松警惕,要時(shí)刻做好迎敵的準(zhǔn)備!只要用心練習(xí)好每一類題目,腳踏實(shí)地,一步一個(gè)腳印兒,并時(shí)刻銘記:Chance favors the prepared mind!考分必將如你所愿,因?yàn)槲抑幌嘈乓稽c(diǎn)一滴的量變industrious,終將成就你質(zhì)變的輝煌illustrious!
Writing Task Two
【A類考試題目】【2012年6月16日】
City dwellers seldom socialize with their neighbors today and the sense of community has been lost.
Why has this happened and how to solve this problem?
【題目翻譯】
住在城市中的人很少與鄰居交流,這種群體意識(shí)已經(jīng)消失。
為什么會(huì)發(fā)生這種情況?如何解決這個(gè)問題?
【題目關(guān)鍵詞】
1-city dwellers
2-socialize with
3-neighbors
4-a sense of community
【寫作小貼士】
對(duì)于這種提出問題、分析問題并解決問題的題目,我們并不陌生,文章整體布局四段,namely,introduction, causes, solutions and conclusion,關(guān)鍵是第二段causes的整理搜集和第三段solutions的對(duì)癥下藥?,F(xiàn)在鄰里之間很少交流,首先,All sorts of people are swamped with their own employment, which leads to the fact that they can hardly set aside sizeable chunks of time to socialize with their neighbors.其次,信息技術(shù)的飛速發(fā)展使人們花在surf the internet上的時(shí)間越來越多,從而對(duì)人與人之間的關(guān)系產(chǎn)生了巨大的影響,we are all actually aware the great revolutions of the past 20 years are in the area of communications technology and this is having a profound effect on relationships. There has never been anything in human history like the personal computer. Who could have foreseen that in a short span of years, the internet would hold more information than all the books that had been produced in the world since writing began? But when we try to address the concepts of community in today’s world it is the manner in which computing has influenced the interaction between people that interests us.最后,犯罪率的居高不下,導(dǎo)致人與人之間缺乏基本的信任,這也促使了人與人之間交流的減少,we all share a fundamental need to belong and feel connected. And when this is missing, we should expect anything but love for people around us. We feel connected when we sense that we have something in common with a particular group of people. it may be that we share with them the same geography---we live in the same town---or that we share a passion for the same football team, the same political party, or because we are members of the same club. Community is that place where we feel a sense of belonging. Within our community, we experience our lives as having meaning. Being part of this group makes us feel we are part of something greater than ourselves. Without them, we feel painfully isolated; with them, we sense that we can achieve something greater than any one of us could on our own.
第三段在給出solutions時(shí),注意圍繞上述第二段的causes來寫,可從個(gè)人、群體和政府這三個(gè)角度進(jìn)行構(gòu)思,communities are complex living things that have their own way of operating. Unless local people are actively engaged and accountable in bringing about change, innovations rarely become a regular part of daily life. While professional services are built around people’s deficiencies, a sense of community is built on an appreciation of people’s gifts. A sense of community depends on each of us being able to appreciate the relationships we have, no matter how inconsequential they seem, and to value the daily encounters with the people who provide the services that make our lives possible.
【寫作語匯一覽表】
1-inconsequential
2-appreciate the relationships
3-value the daily encounters with
4-a sense of community
5-the scarcity of resources
6-experience our lives as having meaning
7-feel painfully isolated
8-something that get tragically lost in this era
9-there is a moment of profound grace when
10-cut right to the heart of everything that is wrong in the lives of these young people
PS:以上內(nèi)容僅供寫作參考
許飛:6月14日雅思寫作解析
Writing Task One
【考察題目】【2012年6月16日】
表格題(table)
據(jù)考生回憶,此次考察的題目是五個(gè)國家在2006年二氧化碳(carbon dioxide)的排放量(emission)情況說明。
【寫作小貼士】
表格題(Table)曾經(jīng)出現(xiàn)在劍橋系列叢書B5P98“Underground Railway Systems”---單表格、B6P30“Global water use by sector”+“Water consumption in Brazil and Congo in 2000”---線圖+表格、B7P30“Percentage of national consumer expenditure by category---2002”以及B8P30“Causes of worldwide land degradation”+“Causes of land degradation by region”---餅圖+表格,針對(duì)此類題目,需提醒大家注意的是:仔細(xì)觀察表格橫行和縱列各自代表的意義,另外在body paragraph(s)寫作的過程中,第一縱列內(nèi)所列內(nèi)容一個(gè)不能缺,具體如下:第一、開頭introduction釋義題目,變換題目words, phrases and sentence structure;第二、在寫作body paragraph(s)時(shí),注意“相似數(shù)據(jù)”描述以及“大小數(shù)據(jù)”比較論述;第三、conclusion段寫作時(shí),注意對(duì)body paragraph(s)數(shù)據(jù)客觀解析部分進(jìn)行總體趨勢概述。
【寫作語匯推薦】
1-figure/data/statistics
2-represent
3-with the exception of
4-show/reveal
5-general increase/decrease
6-comparatively
7-out of the total number of
8-in the percentage of
9-far more significant
10-in the same period
11-compared to
12-fairly stable
13-in comparison to
14-on the other hand
15-be scheduled to
【寫作句型推薦】
1-The table shows that….
2-The opposite appeared to be the case.
3-The figures for both A and B were comparatively low.
4-Out of the total number of those aged over 65 and older, A saw a general increase.
5-C followed this trend.
6-This represented an increase of more than 10 per cent compared to A’s 5 percent and B’s 3 per cent.
7-A figure doubled in comparison to the percentage of….
8-C, on the other hand, remained constant with….
9-C had a lower proportion of….
10-Overall, it is clear that….
So far,Writing Task One無論是Bar Chart,Line Graph,Table,還是Pie Chart,拼圖亦或是Map都有考察,F(xiàn)low Chart/Diagram依舊未曾露面!常言道:More haste, less speed!還得繼續(xù)make some cliché remark:革命尚未成功,同志仍需努力!只要“敵軍”尚未露面,我們就不可放松警惕,要時(shí)刻做好迎敵的準(zhǔn)備!只要用心練習(xí)好每一類題目,腳踏實(shí)地,一步一個(gè)腳印兒,并時(shí)刻銘記:Chance favors the prepared mind!考分必將如你所愿,因?yàn)槲抑幌嘈乓稽c(diǎn)一滴的量變industrious,終將成就你質(zhì)變的輝煌illustrious!
Writing Task Two
【A類考試題目】【2012年6月16日】
City dwellers seldom socialize with their neighbors today and the sense of community has been lost.
Why has this happened and how to solve this problem?
【題目翻譯】
住在城市中的人很少與鄰居交流,這種群體意識(shí)已經(jīng)消失。
為什么會(huì)發(fā)生這種情況?如何解決這個(gè)問題?
【題目關(guān)鍵詞】
1-city dwellers
2-socialize with
3-neighbors
4-a sense of community
【寫作小貼士】
對(duì)于這種提出問題、分析問題并解決問題的題目,我們并不陌生,文章整體布局四段,namely,introduction, causes, solutions and conclusion,關(guān)鍵是第二段causes的整理搜集和第三段solutions的對(duì)癥下藥?,F(xiàn)在鄰里之間很少交流,首先,All sorts of people are swamped with their own employment, which leads to the fact that they can hardly set aside sizeable chunks of time to socialize with their neighbors.其次,信息技術(shù)的飛速發(fā)展使人們花在surf the internet上的時(shí)間越來越多,從而對(duì)人與人之間的關(guān)系產(chǎn)生了巨大的影響,we are all actually aware the great revolutions of the past 20 years are in the area of communications technology and this is having a profound effect on relationships. There has never been anything in human history like the personal computer. Who could have foreseen that in a short span of years, the internet would hold more information than all the books that had been produced in the world since writing began? But when we try to address the concepts of community in today’s world it is the manner in which computing has influenced the interaction between people that interests us.最后,犯罪率的居高不下,導(dǎo)致人與人之間缺乏基本的信任,這也促使了人與人之間交流的減少,we all share a fundamental need to belong and feel connected. And when this is missing, we should expect anything but love for people around us. We feel connected when we sense that we have something in common with a particular group of people. it may be that we share with them the same geography---we live in the same town---or that we share a passion for the same football team, the same political party, or because we are members of the same club. Community is that place where we feel a sense of belonging. Within our community, we experience our lives as having meaning. Being part of this group makes us feel we are part of something greater than ourselves. Without them, we feel painfully isolated; with them, we sense that we can achieve something greater than any one of us could on our own.
第三段在給出solutions時(shí),注意圍繞上述第二段的causes來寫,可從個(gè)人、群體和政府這三個(gè)角度進(jìn)行構(gòu)思,communities are complex living things that have their own way of operating. Unless local people are actively engaged and accountable in bringing about change, innovations rarely become a regular part of daily life. While professional services are built around people’s deficiencies, a sense of community is built on an appreciation of people’s gifts. A sense of community depends on each of us being able to appreciate the relationships we have, no matter how inconsequential they seem, and to value the daily encounters with the people who provide the services that make our lives possible.
【寫作語匯一覽表】
1-inconsequential
2-appreciate the relationships
3-value the daily encounters with
4-a sense of community
5-the scarcity of resources
6-experience our lives as having meaning
7-feel painfully isolated
8-something that get tragically lost in this era
9-there is a moment of profound grace when
10-cut right to the heart of everything that is wrong in the lives of these young people
PS:以上內(nèi)容僅供寫作參考