很多學(xué)生在進(jìn)行雅思寫作考試的時候，都不知道怎么去寫。其中在完成雅思寫作考試上有個好方法就是通過閱讀以往的考試真題來找到寫作思路。那么今天出國留學(xué)網(wǎng)就給大家?guī)?021年4月17日雅思的寫作考試真題，來看看這些題目與解析吧。
    2021年4月17日雅思寫作真題及答案：
    小作文
    動態(tài)表格
    9個國家兩年失業(yè)率對比(1994，2004)
    大作文
    During holidays and weekends， young people spend less time on outdoor activities in natural
    environment， such as hiking and mountain climbing.Why?What can be done to encourage them to
    go out?
    Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or
    experience.
    Write atleast 250 words.
    題目類型：報告類，原因和解決方案
    回應(yīng)要點(diǎn)：young people要看清楚; 舉例盡量對應(yīng)到natural environment; 題目的例子hiking and
    mountain climbing最好也能回應(yīng)一下。
    參考思路：
    Reasons：
    1.年輕人自己學(xué)業(yè)或太忙
    2.他人因素：父母太忙，學(xué)校不重視
    3.現(xiàn)代娛樂方式的多樣
    Solutions：
    1.小孩：家庭與學(xué)校培養(yǎng)習(xí)慣(組織)
    2.青少年：宣傳
    3.青年：少點(diǎn)剝削
    范文：7分
    The youngsters nowadays， particularly those raised in cities， are quite reluctant to spend their
    leisure time outdoors eventhough they have been acknowledged about the psychological and physical
    benefits out of activities in natural surroundings.The young generation is actually quite innocent for
    this situation and other parties are accountable to improve it.
    There are three main factors in less interest in outdoor activities by younger generation， and the
    primary one is the reduced time for recreation， as either the academic pressure or the employers are
    making huge demands on them and thus their learning or working hours extends.To make matters
    worse， moder nindoor recreations such and social as entertainment programs， online gaming
    networking are way more accessible and addictive which can undoubtedly gain more favor than
    outdoor events.Last but not least， schools and fami ies seem to have prioritized academic performance
    over outdoor exercise maybe because it is considered to be potentially risky and time-consuming.
    Several means can be adopted to lead the young back to nature.For children， it is essential to
    organize regular fieldtrips and family day out as pupils are still willing to participate in collective and
    domestic events.When it comes to teens and colleges whose peer group is fairly appealing.activities
    with social and admiring nature like surfing and camping at reasonable price should be organized so
    that teenagers will take part in together during holidays.In addition to these measures which may have
    developed the love for nature， government should urge enterprises not to exploit new graduates and
    guarantee their young employees sufficient and decent spare time.with all these approaches， the
    nature can gradually win its young lovers back from electronic devices.
    To sum up， the younger generation has accepted the current way of recreation passively and with
    the adoption of right approaches， the present situation can be improved.
    雅思作文的評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：
    雅思寫作評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)A：Content
    此項評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)檢測的是考生是否恰當(dāng)回答了寫作題目的要求，主要包括三個方面：內(nèi)容是否切題，立場是否鮮明并得到有效闡釋，結(jié)構(gòu)是否有邏輯性。小作文的要求是考生在大約20分鐘內(nèi)完成一篇至少150字的文章，包括：總結(jié)描述解釋圖表所包含的信息，同時也需要對相關(guān)信息進(jìn)行比較。大作文的要求是考生在大約40分鐘內(nèi)完成一篇至少250字的文章，就某一問題表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)，并利用例證來支撐觀點(diǎn)。
    雅思寫作評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)B：Organisation
    文章的連貫性主要體現(xiàn)在段與段之間，句與句之間，通過表順序的過渡詞完成。句子的好壞主要取決于句子結(jié)構(gòu)的準(zhǔn)確性和豐富性，句子的長度和復(fù)雜性以及用語的邏輯性和正式性。結(jié)構(gòu)的準(zhǔn)確性涉及主謂一致、句子平衡性等問題，結(jié)構(gòu)的豐富性也是給分的一個亮點(diǎn)，好的段落應(yīng)該由不同的句式組成，有些同學(xué)盲目追求句子的長度和難度，卻忽視了其實并不需要每個句子都寫得很長很復(fù)雜，而是長短句結(jié)合，錯落有致。
    雅思寫作評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)C：Vocabulary
    此項評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)考察考生寫作詞匯的多樣性和恰當(dāng)性，詞匯多不一定意味著文章出色，但詞匯準(zhǔn)確恰當(dāng)可以為文章加分，詞匯或觀點(diǎn)的新穎性是二位的。文章詞匯的準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)可以通過積累近義詞，近義短語以及用一些高詞匯達(dá)到。
    雅思寫作評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)D：Grammar
    此項評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)考察考生寫作語法的多樣性和準(zhǔn)確性，主要包括時態(tài)，比較，條件句，情態(tài)動詞，被動語態(tài)。同時也請注意使用復(fù)雜句，句子結(jié)構(gòu)不宜繁瑣，注意整篇文章簡單句和復(fù)雜句用量的平衡，而且在使用標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號的時候也要盡量準(zhǔn)確無誤，細(xì)節(jié)決定成敗。