我是2月份考的托福，寫作得了令我一直自豪至今30分，現(xiàn)在特別寫出來秀秀，不過都過了快2個月了，實在是不能重現(xiàn)當(dāng)時的作文了。只能大概回憶一下自己的文章脈絡(luò)，但愿能給各位考托朋友們提供一點靈感吧。 
    當(dāng)時的作文是TV 應(yīng)該用于教育還是娛樂。 
    我的立場是TV 既要用于教育也要用于娛樂。 
    開頭：當(dāng)時是提出自己的立場啦 
    分論點一：TV 對于語言的教育很重要，然后我舉了CCTV 9， 說明CCTV 9 給我們提供了一個純英語的環(huán)境， 還可以進(jìn)行互動。 
    分論點二：TV 對于科學(xué)的教育也是很重要的。論點一到論點二用了一個過渡句型，大概是：Besides CCTV 9 that provides an excellent environment for us to study English, TV is also an important media for the education of science. 然后提到了CCTV 10，然后具體又說了我從CCTV 10 中學(xué)到了什么。我好像說了宇宙的起源，還說了我們不應(yīng)該連續(xù)坐在電腦面前超過半個小時，暗示ETS 的IBT 非常之不合理!! 呵呵，不知道改卷的人讀出來我的INNUENDO 沒有。 
    分論三：直接轉(zhuǎn)折，轉(zhuǎn)到ENTERTAIMENT。這個地方其實我覺得很多人老覺得娛樂就是湖南衛(wèi)視那些娛樂圈的東西，從而限制了自己的發(fā)展空間。問大家一個問題：體育節(jié)目難道就不算娛樂了?TALK SHOW 我只是點了一下沒有細(xì)說，重點放在了SOCCER 上，說自己是個SOCCER FAN，一周不看就活不了了呵呵。然后說APPRENTLY THERE IS A STRONG PUBLIC DEMAND FOR IT。于是點明了娛樂很重要。 
    最后：再一次點題，具體怎么點的已經(jīng)忘了。SORRY?！?nbsp;
    大概就這個樣子了，思路我個人覺得很明確，從分析到點交卷我用了25 分鐘，剩下5分鐘不想檢查了，覺得也沒有什么大問題， 因為當(dāng)時自己的感覺就很好，我考完覺得應(yīng)該28以上，30分確實有點出乎意料。 
    下面這篇我覺得也應(yīng)該是30分呵呵， 好像我很自戀，不過我真的是這么覺得： 
    TOPIC: many people believe that it is very important to make a large amount of money while others are satisfied to earn a comfortable living. Analyze each viewpoint and take a stand. 
    Not long ago, there was a survey on my campus asking students what they expect for their future after they graduate. Almost 90% of them chose either to earn a comfortable living or to make a lot of money. Since I've been always dreaming of becoming a millionaire, I chose to make a lot of money. 
    In my opinion, earning a comfortable living is a basic requirement for the future. Some people are not that ambitious. They just hope that they can find a decent job that enables them to support their family and their children's education. In face of this global economic crisis, more and more people are going unemployed. Therefore lowering their standard of living would be a good option for them. I guess a lot of people choose to earn a comfortable living because they realize demanding something more is simply too hard to come true under current circumstance. 
    However I chose the other option because I think earning a lot of money can give myself more opportunities. For example, if I have a lot of money, then on one hand I have more chances to meet with other rich people. Therefore I have more opportunities to do business with them and attract more investment. Eventually I will be able to make more and more money. On the other hand, if I don't want to work that hard anymore, I can retire at anytime. I don't need to worry about supporting families and myself as long as I have a strong economic base. What's more, it will enable me to have a very decent living. 
    Earning a lot of money not only offers me more opportunities, but also benefits other people. I always sympathize with people living in poor countries. They are so poor that they don't even have right to ask for their basic living requirement, such as food and water. If I had enough money, I would donate money to them directly to help them. Of course it would not help everyone, much less solve the overall problem, but at least some people will benefit from this. In addition, I can also raise a fund to provide them education. This way they will have appropriate knowledge to improve their own situation. 
    In this competitive world, having a lot of money surely makes me more competent. However the fact that it allows me to help more people is what makes more appealing to me.