（一）
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Immoral Behavior in Public. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:
1.我們經(jīng)常在公共場合見到各種不道德的行為，敘述你的一次相關經(jīng)歷。
2.這些不文明行為會有哪些影響。
3.我們應該怎樣改善這種現(xiàn)象。
●審題概述●
這是一篇議論文，可以根據(jù)作文要求列出提綱：第一部分，列舉不文明行為并敘述一次相關經(jīng)歷;第二部分，不文明行為的影響，一兩個即可;第三部分，提出建議。
【范文】
Immoral Behavior in Public
To witness 1immoral behavior in public, one need only visit the Beijing subway. I still remember the first time I took the Beijing subway. It was an early morning. I was in a hurry to go to school. When I was trying to get a ticket, I found a lot of people waiting in front of me, but nobody was in the line.
1Immoral behaviors in public 2initiate a series of problems. One of the most serious ones is that it may exert a negative impact on our 3sense of social responsibility. We will keep ignoring other people’s rights and feelings, and in turn, we too will be disrespected some day.
The reform of1 this phenomenon is certainly not easy. With an eye on practical 2implementation and 3cost effectiveness , I propose that society make it clear in every way that people who fail to respect the ④common good will be seriously punished. Stricter policies for this should be made to correct this phenomenon as soon as possible.
We all expect “A World without Thieves". Everyone 1shares the huge responsibility of 2demonstrating his or her justice at the proper time. Personal responsibility is vital to build a harmonious socialist society.
◇第一段思路點評：
作文要求第一點，相關經(jīng)歷
◇語言點提示：
1 immoral behavior in public：直接點題
◇第二段思路點評：
不文明行為的影響
◇語言點提示：
1 immoral behavior in public：重復名詞詞組，與第一段銜接
2 initiate：意思是“產(chǎn)生，發(fā)動”
3sense of social responsibility：意思是“社會責任感”
◇第三段思路點評：
如何改善這些現(xiàn)象
◇語言點提示：
1 this phenomenon：指代前文“immoral behavior in public”，與上文銜接，且避免重復
2implementation：意為“執(zhí)行，實施”
3cost effectiveness：意為“成本效率”
④ common good：意為“公益”
◇第四段思路點評：
總結
◇語言點提示：
1share a huge responsibility: 意為“承擔重大責任”
2demonstrate：意為“展現(xiàn)”
(二)
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Should We still Cherish Chinese Traditional Virtues. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:
1. 當今的年輕人越來越強調個性發(fā)展;
2. 發(fā)展個性是否意味著忽視中國的傳統(tǒng)美德;
3. 你的觀點。
●審題概述●
這是一篇議論文，題目比較大。主要討論個性發(fā)展和傳統(tǒng)美德之間的關系。根據(jù)提示，可分為三部分：年輕人的個性發(fā)展，可以適當舉例;個性發(fā)展是否意味著忽視傳統(tǒng)美德，可以籠統(tǒng)地講，也可以具體地解釋某一種美德;最后提出自己的觀點
【范文】
Should We still Cherish Chinese Traditional Virtues
Today’s youth do things in their own ways, spend money on whatever they want and talk to people in their own languages——personality development is 1overstated by young people these days. To some of them, personality means to be totally different from who their parents used to be.
But the problem is that during their pursuit of their personal goals they ignore some of the traditional virtues of which their 1forefathers were proud. Take the question of 2fidelity to elders for example. With better education and different experiences, some young people find it’s hard to agree with their parents any longer. They have a feeling of superiority and even sometimes 3turn their back on their elder parents.
To me, personality development and traditional virtues 1have nothing to do with right or wrong. In our society, we need them both. These virtues help you to become a better Chinese, while personality development will improve your own character.
◇第一段思路點評：
個性的發(fā)展
◇語言點提示：
1overstate：意為“夸大”
◇第二段思路點評：
個性發(fā)展是否意味著忽視傳統(tǒng)美德
◇語言點提示：
1forefather：意為“祖先”
2fidelity：意為“忠實，忠誠”
3turn one’s back on：意為“背棄，拋棄”
◇第三段思路點評：
個人觀點
◇語言點提示：
have nothing to do with：意為“ 與……無關”
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Immoral Behavior in Public. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:
1.我們經(jīng)常在公共場合見到各種不道德的行為，敘述你的一次相關經(jīng)歷。
2.這些不文明行為會有哪些影響。
3.我們應該怎樣改善這種現(xiàn)象。
●審題概述●
這是一篇議論文，可以根據(jù)作文要求列出提綱：第一部分，列舉不文明行為并敘述一次相關經(jīng)歷;第二部分，不文明行為的影響，一兩個即可;第三部分，提出建議。
【范文】
Immoral Behavior in Public
To witness 1immoral behavior in public, one need only visit the Beijing subway. I still remember the first time I took the Beijing subway. It was an early morning. I was in a hurry to go to school. When I was trying to get a ticket, I found a lot of people waiting in front of me, but nobody was in the line.
1Immoral behaviors in public 2initiate a series of problems. One of the most serious ones is that it may exert a negative impact on our 3sense of social responsibility. We will keep ignoring other people’s rights and feelings, and in turn, we too will be disrespected some day.
The reform of1 this phenomenon is certainly not easy. With an eye on practical 2implementation and 3cost effectiveness , I propose that society make it clear in every way that people who fail to respect the ④common good will be seriously punished. Stricter policies for this should be made to correct this phenomenon as soon as possible.
We all expect “A World without Thieves". Everyone 1shares the huge responsibility of 2demonstrating his or her justice at the proper time. Personal responsibility is vital to build a harmonious socialist society.
◇第一段思路點評：
作文要求第一點，相關經(jīng)歷
◇語言點提示：
1 immoral behavior in public：直接點題
◇第二段思路點評：
不文明行為的影響
◇語言點提示：
1 immoral behavior in public：重復名詞詞組，與第一段銜接
2 initiate：意思是“產(chǎn)生，發(fā)動”
3sense of social responsibility：意思是“社會責任感”
◇第三段思路點評：
如何改善這些現(xiàn)象
◇語言點提示：
1 this phenomenon：指代前文“immoral behavior in public”，與上文銜接，且避免重復
2implementation：意為“執(zhí)行，實施”
3cost effectiveness：意為“成本效率”
④ common good：意為“公益”
◇第四段思路點評：
總結
◇語言點提示：
1share a huge responsibility: 意為“承擔重大責任”
2demonstrate：意為“展現(xiàn)”
(二)
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Should We still Cherish Chinese Traditional Virtues. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:
1. 當今的年輕人越來越強調個性發(fā)展;
2. 發(fā)展個性是否意味著忽視中國的傳統(tǒng)美德;
3. 你的觀點。
●審題概述●
這是一篇議論文，題目比較大。主要討論個性發(fā)展和傳統(tǒng)美德之間的關系。根據(jù)提示，可分為三部分：年輕人的個性發(fā)展，可以適當舉例;個性發(fā)展是否意味著忽視傳統(tǒng)美德，可以籠統(tǒng)地講，也可以具體地解釋某一種美德;最后提出自己的觀點
【范文】
Should We still Cherish Chinese Traditional Virtues
Today’s youth do things in their own ways, spend money on whatever they want and talk to people in their own languages——personality development is 1overstated by young people these days. To some of them, personality means to be totally different from who their parents used to be.
But the problem is that during their pursuit of their personal goals they ignore some of the traditional virtues of which their 1forefathers were proud. Take the question of 2fidelity to elders for example. With better education and different experiences, some young people find it’s hard to agree with their parents any longer. They have a feeling of superiority and even sometimes 3turn their back on their elder parents.
To me, personality development and traditional virtues 1have nothing to do with right or wrong. In our society, we need them both. These virtues help you to become a better Chinese, while personality development will improve your own character.
◇第一段思路點評：
個性的發(fā)展
◇語言點提示：
1overstate：意為“夸大”
◇第二段思路點評：
個性發(fā)展是否意味著忽視傳統(tǒng)美德
◇語言點提示：
1forefather：意為“祖先”
2fidelity：意為“忠實，忠誠”
3turn one’s back on：意為“背棄，拋棄”
◇第三段思路點評：
個人觀點
◇語言點提示：
have nothing to do with：意為“ 與……無關”