20108.27——8.31 GMAT作文機(jī)經(jīng) AI篇
AI24 Although most people wish to live long lives, attempting to significantly extend the average human life span would be a mistake. If achieved, this would place an enormous burden on resources, lowering the quality of life for everyone.
提綱：
延長(zhǎng)壽命沒錯(cuò)
1。生存是人的本性，活的長(zhǎng)更沒錯(cuò)，何況并沒有一個(gè)標(biāo)準(zhǔn)何為生存的長(zhǎng)短，憑什么不讓繼續(xù)活下去呢
2。隨著科技進(jìn)步，人們會(huì)有辦法找到替代能源，從而保護(hù)動(dòng)植物和礦物資源
3。人們想繼續(xù)生活長(zhǎng)久要通過改善環(huán)境來實(shí)現(xiàn)，因此人們也會(huì)對(duì)環(huán)境做出保護(hù)措施
AI25 Nations should cooperate to develop regulations that limit children’s access to adult material on the Internet.”*
*The Internet is a worldwide computer network
提綱：
The issue here is whether an international effort to regulate children's access to adult material on the Internet is worthwhile. In my view, nations should attempt to regulate such access by cooperative regulatory effort. I base this view on the universality and importance of the interest in protecting children from harm, and on the inherently global nature of the problem.
Adults everywhere have a serious interest in limiting children's access to pornographic material. Pornographic material tends to confuse children----distorting their notion of sex, of themselves as sexual beings, and of how people ought to treat one another. Particularly in the case of domination and child pornography, the messages children receive from pornographic material cannot contribute in a healthy way to their emerging sexuality. Given this important interest that knows no cultural bounds, we should regulate children's access to sexually explicit material on the internet.
國(guó)際合作在這中間十分必要.因?yàn)檫@種犯罪的遏止如同當(dāng)年控制臭氧空洞(ozone depletion)的元兇PRIME CRIMINAL(CFC)時(shí)候一樣單獨(dú)靠一個(gè)國(guó)家的力量這種污染是無法遏止的.
誠(chéng)然,會(huì)遇到很大的政治制約(POLITICAL HURDLE)
1. pornographic material has seriously negative effect on children-misleading their sense of sex, of the normal relationships between people, and of themselves as sexual beings. 兒童的好奇心以及缺乏正確的認(rèn)識(shí)，are vulnerable to the bad influence of such adults materials，從而distract their concentration from study to those distorted notions. 人們有責(zé)任和義務(wù)幫助孩子，protect them from being hurt and influenced by such materials.
2. However, 國(guó)家范圍內(nèi)的regulations lose their previous effectiveness because of the development of internet. Just as the companies which contaminate the natural environment move to other countries after being punished, so the company offering pornographic materials on line can move to other parts of the world to avoid punishment. 所以，國(guó)家聯(lián)合起來，非常有必要。
可以通過象環(huán)保那樣的聯(lián)合的和約。
3. Admittedly, 有困難，與甚至敵對(duì)的國(guó)家hostile 但是不能放棄努力。
Optional words:
Regulation/ law/ restriction
Limit/confine/.control/ hamper/ inhibit/
Thesis sentence:
View1: adult material on the internet may have terrible affect on children with immature point of view and judgment.
Evidence: pornographic material. tends to confuse children----distorting their notion of sex, and of how people ought to treat one another.
View2:since Internet has no national boundaries, nations should attempt to regulate such access by cooperative regulatory effort.
AI24 Although most people wish to live long lives, attempting to significantly extend the average human life span would be a mistake. If achieved, this would place an enormous burden on resources, lowering the quality of life for everyone.
提綱：
延長(zhǎng)壽命沒錯(cuò)
1。生存是人的本性，活的長(zhǎng)更沒錯(cuò)，何況并沒有一個(gè)標(biāo)準(zhǔn)何為生存的長(zhǎng)短，憑什么不讓繼續(xù)活下去呢
2。隨著科技進(jìn)步，人們會(huì)有辦法找到替代能源，從而保護(hù)動(dòng)植物和礦物資源
3。人們想繼續(xù)生活長(zhǎng)久要通過改善環(huán)境來實(shí)現(xiàn)，因此人們也會(huì)對(duì)環(huán)境做出保護(hù)措施
AI25 Nations should cooperate to develop regulations that limit children’s access to adult material on the Internet.”*
*The Internet is a worldwide computer network
提綱：
The issue here is whether an international effort to regulate children's access to adult material on the Internet is worthwhile. In my view, nations should attempt to regulate such access by cooperative regulatory effort. I base this view on the universality and importance of the interest in protecting children from harm, and on the inherently global nature of the problem.
Adults everywhere have a serious interest in limiting children's access to pornographic material. Pornographic material tends to confuse children----distorting their notion of sex, of themselves as sexual beings, and of how people ought to treat one another. Particularly in the case of domination and child pornography, the messages children receive from pornographic material cannot contribute in a healthy way to their emerging sexuality. Given this important interest that knows no cultural bounds, we should regulate children's access to sexually explicit material on the internet.
國(guó)際合作在這中間十分必要.因?yàn)檫@種犯罪的遏止如同當(dāng)年控制臭氧空洞(ozone depletion)的元兇PRIME CRIMINAL(CFC)時(shí)候一樣單獨(dú)靠一個(gè)國(guó)家的力量這種污染是無法遏止的.
誠(chéng)然,會(huì)遇到很大的政治制約(POLITICAL HURDLE)
1. pornographic material has seriously negative effect on children-misleading their sense of sex, of the normal relationships between people, and of themselves as sexual beings. 兒童的好奇心以及缺乏正確的認(rèn)識(shí)，are vulnerable to the bad influence of such adults materials，從而distract their concentration from study to those distorted notions. 人們有責(zé)任和義務(wù)幫助孩子，protect them from being hurt and influenced by such materials.
2. However, 國(guó)家范圍內(nèi)的regulations lose their previous effectiveness because of the development of internet. Just as the companies which contaminate the natural environment move to other countries after being punished, so the company offering pornographic materials on line can move to other parts of the world to avoid punishment. 所以，國(guó)家聯(lián)合起來，非常有必要。
可以通過象環(huán)保那樣的聯(lián)合的和約。
3. Admittedly, 有困難，與甚至敵對(duì)的國(guó)家hostile 但是不能放棄努力。
Optional words:
Regulation/ law/ restriction
Limit/confine/.control/ hamper/ inhibit/
Thesis sentence:
View1: adult material on the internet may have terrible affect on children with immature point of view and judgment.
Evidence: pornographic material. tends to confuse children----distorting their notion of sex, and of how people ought to treat one another.
View2:since Internet has no national boundaries, nations should attempt to regulate such access by cooperative regulatory effort.