My understandings about volunteer work
    羅智圓
    四川省成都市成都實(shí)驗(yàn)外國語學(xué)校2011級9班
    Nowadys, more and more voluntary organzations exist in the world. Worldwide Red Cross and Red Crescent is the most famous one. It was established in 1863 by a Swiss bussinessman after he had witnessed the appalling casualties of wars who simply died from lack of medical services. In addition, the volunteers in the May 12 earthquake and the 2008 Beijing Olympics have touched people ou over the world. Their spirrt of bravery and sacrifice as well as love, have been branded on people's mind. In my opinion, volunteer work is a kind of thing that we can't ignore and it will definitely take a more active pant in the word in many aspects in the future.
    First of all, volunteer work promote the well-beings of individuals. It helps the victims of wars, earthquakes, colcanic erruptions and so on. Victims in the disasters no longer worry that they may die from lack of care. Volunteers also bring love and respect to the victims and they'll reassure the victims and help the victims regain the courage to suruive. On the other hand, volunteer work also prouide precious opportunities for volunteers so that they will meet more people, know more about the would and obtain more experionces.
    Secondly, volunteer work also do good to families. Many families are apart in course of the disasters. Wife missed her husband and children missed their father. They will feel lonely and hapeless and they'll lose hope in life. It is holpful that volunteers accompany them and reassure them. With a lot of people surrounding them and helping them, they will feel they are loved and have the courage to continue the life and reconstruct family.
    Thirdly, volunteer work also has a good effect on communities and the world. In May 12 earthquake and Beijing Olympics, volunteers have set a great example. In the 2008 Beijing Olympics, volunteers help visitors find the way to statiums and hotels. They always greet visitors with a beautiful smile. Victors who have been to Beijing applaud for their patience and elegance. They pass the philosophy to communities and the world in action: “One world, one dream. If everyone gives a hand to person in need, the world will become more beautiful.” Many people elevote their lives to voluntary work and they represent the highest level of moral conduct of human beings. I believe that more and more people will join the volunteer work. It is encouraging to think that voluntary organizations like the Red Cross and Red crescent exist and are dedicated to peace and hospmony.
    If we have faith in ourselves, no mountain is too high to climb. One of the greatest achievements in life is to do what people think you can't do. Although we face a lot of severe problems such as environment. Conflicts. lack of recources and natural disasters, with the colinteer work existing, we still have a bright future.
    專家點(diǎn)評：該生語言組織較為緊密，邏輯比較縝密，用詞和句型都比較高級，但是拼寫和語法上面還有待修煉，而且尤其要杜絕中式英語問題。
    專家建議：中式英語是以漢語思維方式為出發(fā)點(diǎn)，用英漢詞典上的單一詞義，根據(jù)英語語法編造出來的英語句子。中國式英語在中國人之間可以勉強(qiáng)溝通思想，但是在以英語為母語的國家或人群中無法使用，或不能被接受。中國式英語在使用英語的中國人中普遍存在。我們在學(xué)習(xí)時(shí)一定要杜絕“望文生義”，“一詞一義”，“直接翻譯”等固有的思維模式，多看看經(jīng)典的英語文章，會(huì)對我們的學(xué)習(xí)大有益處。