2011年12月英語四級作文真題解析及范文（文都版）
12月的四級作文要求寫一篇意志和成功的關(guān)系的短文。
首先，這個題目沒有任何題材范圍上的突破，和大學(xué)生的日常生活和成長有關(guān)。
第二，這個題目其實很有利于考生的發(fā)揮?？梢砸妹嗣詠黹_篇，也可以引用成功的實例或者自己的經(jīng)歷加以佐證。但是要注意，情緒渲染點到為止，否則，不僅不會打動閱卷老師，反而有不夠縝密和結(jié)構(gòu)松散之嫌。
第三，四級作文要求大家應(yīng)該體現(xiàn)出亮點，體現(xiàn)出英語(論壇)語言水平，方式很多，比如非常用詞替換常用詞，特殊句式，從句的使用等等，。就今年12月這個題目而言，可以用一個虛擬語氣的句子，“如果…….就（不）……..”。比如在談曾經(jīng)的因為有堅強意志而成功的一個例子時，可以用Had I not done sth，I would have這樣的句式。
第四，不要聰明反被聰明誤，有同學(xué)會論述意志力的重要性，然后“辯證地”談只有意志力也不行等等。這回削弱自己主題的表達，而不是什么“證全面”。
2011年12月四級作文真題及范文（文都版）
【參考范文1】
“Where there is a will, there is way” is an old proverb which almost everyone knows, but not all understand it so well. Actually, it means that if you are really resolved to do something, no matter how difficult it might be, never give up.
In fact, strong will is a kind of good quality which successful people should own. A great man is always one who has a firm resolution and an inflexible spirit. One will never succeed all his life without a firm will to get the final victory. As a rule, great tasks are accomplished by men of strong will. For example, Dr. Sun Yatsen, the founder of the Republic of China, set the Chinese people free from the Manchurian rule through a long period of hard struggle. Many of his attempts failed and many of his followers were killed, but he had an inflexible spirit and stuck to his cause. Finally, he made the revolution of 1911 a success. The same is true of men in all walks of life.
It is quite obvious that there is nothing difficult in the world, if you make up your mind to do it, you will certainly accomplish your end. That stands to reason. So as for students like us, we should have a good attitude towards failure. Facing with difficulties and failures, keep heads up and never give up. Besides, we should make full preparation, though strong will help us overcome the difficulties, it is not for person who has no preparation.
【參考范文2】
There is an old saying: where there is a will, there is a way. It tells us that a strong will is the most essential quality that anyone who wants to achieve success. It can contribute a lot to one’s success.
Although“All roads lead to Rome”, none of them is completely smooth. Our life is filled with obstacles which may make us feel so hopeless that we may choose to give up. At the crucial moment, strong will helps a lot. As a matter of fact, the ability to work through difficult situation and unfortunate events with strong will can make one stronger and more capable. In other words, if we want to realize life’s goal, we must keep forging ahead with strong consciousness.
From what has been discussed above, we can see that the establishment of tough determination is of great importance to everyone. With a strong will, including our knowledge, we will be able to deal with any situation in our life. Whatever we do, as long as we stick to and do not give up easily, we will realize the goal at last.
12月的四級作文要求寫一篇意志和成功的關(guān)系的短文。
首先，這個題目沒有任何題材范圍上的突破，和大學(xué)生的日常生活和成長有關(guān)。
第二，這個題目其實很有利于考生的發(fā)揮?？梢砸妹嗣詠黹_篇，也可以引用成功的實例或者自己的經(jīng)歷加以佐證。但是要注意，情緒渲染點到為止，否則，不僅不會打動閱卷老師，反而有不夠縝密和結(jié)構(gòu)松散之嫌。
第三，四級作文要求大家應(yīng)該體現(xiàn)出亮點，體現(xiàn)出英語(論壇)語言水平，方式很多，比如非常用詞替換常用詞，特殊句式，從句的使用等等，。就今年12月這個題目而言，可以用一個虛擬語氣的句子，“如果…….就（不）……..”。比如在談曾經(jīng)的因為有堅強意志而成功的一個例子時，可以用Had I not done sth，I would have這樣的句式。
第四，不要聰明反被聰明誤，有同學(xué)會論述意志力的重要性，然后“辯證地”談只有意志力也不行等等。這回削弱自己主題的表達，而不是什么“證全面”。
2011年12月四級作文真題及范文（文都版）
【參考范文1】
“Where there is a will, there is way” is an old proverb which almost everyone knows, but not all understand it so well. Actually, it means that if you are really resolved to do something, no matter how difficult it might be, never give up.
In fact, strong will is a kind of good quality which successful people should own. A great man is always one who has a firm resolution and an inflexible spirit. One will never succeed all his life without a firm will to get the final victory. As a rule, great tasks are accomplished by men of strong will. For example, Dr. Sun Yatsen, the founder of the Republic of China, set the Chinese people free from the Manchurian rule through a long period of hard struggle. Many of his attempts failed and many of his followers were killed, but he had an inflexible spirit and stuck to his cause. Finally, he made the revolution of 1911 a success. The same is true of men in all walks of life.
It is quite obvious that there is nothing difficult in the world, if you make up your mind to do it, you will certainly accomplish your end. That stands to reason. So as for students like us, we should have a good attitude towards failure. Facing with difficulties and failures, keep heads up and never give up. Besides, we should make full preparation, though strong will help us overcome the difficulties, it is not for person who has no preparation.
【參考范文2】
There is an old saying: where there is a will, there is a way. It tells us that a strong will is the most essential quality that anyone who wants to achieve success. It can contribute a lot to one’s success.
Although“All roads lead to Rome”, none of them is completely smooth. Our life is filled with obstacles which may make us feel so hopeless that we may choose to give up. At the crucial moment, strong will helps a lot. As a matter of fact, the ability to work through difficult situation and unfortunate events with strong will can make one stronger and more capable. In other words, if we want to realize life’s goal, we must keep forging ahead with strong consciousness.
From what has been discussed above, we can see that the establishment of tough determination is of great importance to everyone. With a strong will, including our knowledge, we will be able to deal with any situation in our life. Whatever we do, as long as we stick to and do not give up easily, we will realize the goal at last.